Saturday, February 2, 2008

Hiaku

Inspired by my friend Puffbird, here is a hiaku:

Carts dance on pavement,
Wind and rain as their partners,
Ignoring man's lines.

3 comments:

Fern said...

Very nice!

I'm also impressed with whoever was motivated enough to attach working wheels to the kids' box-car.

Nothing beats a nice big box!

Susan Z said...

That would be me...I was trying to think of materials I had and I knew that they would want steering wheels and the tape just wasn't sticking for the wheels and....Besides, I like a good challenge. /grin

Jennifer said...

great hiaku!! and so true... I can totally picture the carts moving around b/c of the wind and getting sprinkled with rain. :)
Hugs, Jenn