Saturday, February 2, 2008


Inspired by my friend Puffbird, here is a hiaku:

Carts dance on pavement,
Wind and rain as their partners,
Ignoring man's lines.


Fern said...

Very nice!

I'm also impressed with whoever was motivated enough to attach working wheels to the kids' box-car.

Nothing beats a nice big box!

Susan Z said...

That would be me...I was trying to think of materials I had and I knew that they would want steering wheels and the tape just wasn't sticking for the wheels and....Besides, I like a good challenge. /grin

Jennifer said...

great hiaku!! and so true... I can totally picture the carts moving around b/c of the wind and getting sprinkled with rain. :)
Hugs, Jenn